Bahaha. So great! I imagine that's how it would go if they had sex-lots of snarky dialogue, some brief and way hot action, and more snarky 'morning after' dialogue.

House artfully widened his eyes.

I liked that line because it always makes me happy to see people describing a very common motion in writing with new words. It's always 'dramatically' and stuff, so 'artfully' put a nice new spin on it.

Plus, you handled the Chase and dad with cancer thing very well, I think.

And I reallllly like your icon. (Yay Guideslash!)