This is SOOOOOO good! There are so many things I appreciate about this fic. First and foremost is that Scotty and Chekov are already in an established relationship. I have nothing against voyeurism, but only sometimes, and the way you played things out was much sexier. Also, on a smaller note, I love how you wrote Chekov's speech patterns. Some writers really slaughter the way he speaks, and some ignore it entirely. It really hurts me head sometimes to read fiction where you can't tell the difference between Chekov's lines and other characters, you know?
Lastly, what made this fic so incredibly enjoyable is that it wasn't one dimensionally smutty. I love that there was humor and snark and sexiness. It made it feel more like Chekov was really in the room with Scotty. I can only imagine how he must be feeling on the bridge knowing that Scotty is finally getting around to watching the tape. LOL.
Anyway, I really really wish there was more of this!
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Date: 2009-08-02 11:20 pm (UTC)Lastly, what made this fic so incredibly enjoyable is that it wasn't one dimensionally smutty. I love that there was humor and snark and sexiness. It made it feel more like Chekov was really in the room with Scotty. I can only imagine how he must be feeling on the bridge knowing that Scotty is finally getting around to watching the tape. LOL.
Anyway, I really really wish there was more of this!