I kind of meant for it to be more porny than it turned out to be, but I had read an article about sex writing earlier in the day, and it talked about how sex talk isn't just "ooh, harder, do me" or whatever, but can have other things in it, like, "Oh, shit, is the stove still runni-- ah!" or something.
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Date: 2009-06-13 10:25 pm (UTC)I kind of meant for it to be more porny than it turned out to be, but I had read an article about sex writing earlier in the day, and it talked about how sex talk isn't just "ooh, harder, do me" or whatever, but can have other things in it, like, "Oh, shit, is the stove still runni-- ah!" or something.
Yay! A happy reader. <3