ext_192321 ([identity profile] quickyfant.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] darktrent182 2009-02-22 07:39 pm (UTC)

Re: WOW

Hi!

*blinkblink* Hi, there! I wasn't expecting a comment so soon.

Well I have a serious case of insomnia and OCD, so I start searching for something to occupy my mind on...and YAY I found a new chapter with THREE installments!!! My brain was SO happy!

Later I thought I made a too short commentary for such awesomeness! So I wanted to comment a little bit more! ;) Sorry if this is spamming your commentary page!

I liked how Ebenezar "introduced" Harry to the senior council members who could lend a hand if they knew Harry as Harry and not Harry driven into a corner! "You'd've told them to fuck off, and then you'd be up a creek without a paddle." Found it a nice move of the master Blackstaff!
You know I was so intrigued by this info Martha Liberty gave: "but the Merlin has been the ghost's master at least twice. He is in a better position to know what the ghost is capable of."
I had formed an idea that all of Hrothberts masters met an untimely dead, because of him or becuase of their greed for power, or both! But it is really interesting to think the Merlin was Hrothberts masters two times and that means he let him go to another wizard also two times! Really intrigued about those chapters of Hrothberts imprisonment! (Do you see the blatant begging for more info I am writing into this comment? *snickers*!)

"People do not do well in cages," Listens-to-Wind said. I just love your Joseph for this line!!

And I so enjoyed Harry and the towel scene and I was about to suggest we try to conserve water by showering together!! LOL!

Considering the Inquisition, I figured that the Blackstaff in Bob's time would've been more than willing to use some pretty scary stuff in order to get Bob to recant or whatever. Or maybe the guy was ordered to by the Council. Either way, being stuck in his skull with no apparent chance at freedom is a scary thing to do to the poor guy. Why not torture him beforehand as well? Poor Bob.

*Nods* I can imagine the whole trial and execution was rather painful and wanting to make an example of him...Poor Bob indeed...

"If the Council decides to return me to my original sentence, swear to me you will not interfere."

"Not only no," I snapped, "but hell no."


Loved this part as the beginning of the "I am allowed to protect you and do stupid things to save you, but you are not" coming from both of them!!

"I hope you realize that if you're given the order to kill me, I won't allow any harm to come to Harry."

Ebenezar nodded. "He's stubborn as hell, though. I'm going to have a fight on my hands one way or another."

"Hey, he's also sitting right here." I scowled at the two of them.


Loved the talking over Harry's head here! They both care about Harry and its nice to see how they want to protect him! ;)

Yeah, I kind of figured that if Bob was going to be evil, he wouldn't do it in half-measures.

Yes and it was a powerful scene!! I would have liked more of the trial, but I hear that it was rather difficult to write!

And nearing the end of my comment spam: I really liked the description of Harry's soulgaze and Bob having a sort of comfort in what Harry saw in him! And Harry taking the curse upon him too if Bob ever did black magic again it was very moving!!

And one of my absolute favorite quotes from this story would be: Bob arched an eyebrow, looking at me like I was depriving a village somewhere of its idiot. LOL!

Just a warning, I have no earthly idea when I'll be able to work on the next series
Yes of course, please do not feel pressured, its only nice to think more is coming in this series, whenever your muse kidnaps you! ;)

And again thanks it was a wonderful chapter!

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