But it left one wondering.. (Or maybe just vainly hoping that Bob wouldn't really want to leave Harry flat, poor old Harry.. ;)
Demon!Bob was the one to suggest solitude. Granted, Harry didn't know what Bob would do with newfound freedom, because Harry's never asked about it before, but I doubt Bob would leave Harry. In my mind, they've been friends for so long that Bob feels okay with leaning on Harry while he figures out how to be alive again, because Harry's relied on him for so much information. There's an element of even trade there, but ymmv, of course. *nod*
And hey, bit of a cliffy ending there. What's going to happen to our men? Oh, the suspence is bad..
Sorry! In a way, this is supposed to get me to kickstart and get into the rest of the series. I'm still pondering what I want to do, but at the same time, I have more of an idea, because it left a thread for me to easily remember and follow. *nod*
Ok. Two silly, uninteresting sidenotes (that are both just due to my subconscious playing tricks but..) in ch. 2 when Bob's explaining how he'd enjoy returning to his hermit's life and says "No one else to bother me.." I just kept on hearing the "Broadway Musicals of the 1940s.. No roommate to bother me. How can it get any better than this?" from the 'If you were gay' song that some sneaky soul edited to Bob/Harry on YT, you know the one. I couldn't help cracking up. Tiredness, I suppose.
*blink*
AHAHAHAHA! I can't believe I did that. I had completely not thought about it. I know there had been a DF vid about it, but the kind of vids where it's supposed to be the characters 'talking' haven't really impressed me that much? Still, I can see the similarities. Oh, Rod!Bob!
The other was "It's a simple thing to nudge someone, to use their own fears against them." by Not-Bob in ch.4 and was promptly hearing the Joker's "Y'see, madness, as you know, is like gravity. All it takes is a little...push." so yeah, I'm sure you didn't mean that, yes? Mind just associates things twistedly. 9_9
Huh? Wow. *blink* I haven't seen Dark Knight -- money is tight -- so I hadn't realized I'd done that either. And no, I didn't mean for that to rhyme just now.
Thanks for writing! Very addictive/enjoyable! ^_^
Ah, the kind of feedback I live for. I'm very glad you found it enjoyable, and thank you for your constructive feedback. This is the kind of feedback I live for, so to see a new commenter take the time to leave something this long and thought-out -- and still thinks the fic is good! -- is very awesome for me. Thank you again.
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But it left one wondering.. (Or maybe just vainly hoping that Bob wouldn't really want to leave Harry flat, poor old Harry.. ;)
Demon!Bob was the one to suggest solitude. Granted, Harry didn't know what Bob would do with newfound freedom, because Harry's never asked about it before, but I doubt Bob would leave Harry. In my mind, they've been friends for so long that Bob feels okay with leaning on Harry while he figures out how to be alive again, because Harry's relied on him for so much information. There's an element of even trade there, but ymmv, of course. *nod*
And hey, bit of a cliffy ending there. What's going to happen to our men? Oh, the suspence is bad..
Sorry! In a way, this is supposed to get me to kickstart and get into the rest of the series. I'm still pondering what I want to do, but at the same time, I have more of an idea, because it left a thread for me to easily remember and follow. *nod*
Ok. Two silly, uninteresting sidenotes (that are both just due to my subconscious playing tricks but..) in ch. 2 when Bob's explaining how he'd enjoy returning to his hermit's life and says "No one else to bother me.." I just kept on hearing the "Broadway Musicals of the 1940s.. No roommate to bother me. How can it get any better than this?" from the 'If you were gay' song that some sneaky soul edited to Bob/Harry on YT, you know the one. I couldn't help cracking up. Tiredness, I suppose.
*blink*
AHAHAHAHA! I can't believe I did that. I had completely not thought about it. I know there had been a DF vid about it, but the kind of vids where it's supposed to be the characters 'talking' haven't really impressed me that much? Still, I can see the similarities. Oh, Rod!Bob!
The other was "It's a simple thing to nudge someone, to use their own fears against them." by Not-Bob in ch.4 and was promptly hearing the Joker's "Y'see, madness, as you know, is like gravity. All it takes is a little...push." so yeah, I'm sure you didn't mean that, yes? Mind just associates things twistedly. 9_9
Huh? Wow. *blink* I haven't seen Dark Knight -- money is tight -- so I hadn't realized I'd done that either. And no, I didn't mean for that to rhyme just now.
Thanks for writing! Very addictive/enjoyable! ^_^
Ah, the kind of feedback I live for. I'm very glad you found it enjoyable, and thank you for your constructive feedback. This is the kind of feedback I live for, so to see a new commenter take the time to leave something this long and thought-out -- and still thinks the fic is good! -- is very awesome for me. Thank you again.