My initial reaction is that you literally left me breathless.
I'm sorry my comments are more involved but this is the best I can do...
So here it goes:
I loved every minute of it. OMG, the range of emotions I went through was just... too much to describe. I felt for Bob, I felt for Harry, I felt for BOTH of them at the end.
The Curse is so damn awesome! Your version of it that is--not awesome that he's under it... I sure hope that true love can conquer all!
Your dialogue is spot on. Your writing style is brilliant. You have me glued to my seat and jittery as to what's going to happen next!
Once again, THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR WRITING THIS!!!!!
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Date: 2010-05-18 03:15 am (UTC)My initial reaction is that you literally left me breathless.
I'm sorry my comments are more involved but this is the best I can do...
So here it goes:
I loved every minute of it. OMG, the range of emotions I went through was just... too much to describe. I felt for Bob, I felt for Harry, I felt for BOTH of them at the end.
The Curse is so damn awesome! Your version of it that is--not awesome that he's under it... I sure hope that true love can conquer all!
Your dialogue is spot on. Your writing style is brilliant. You have me glued to my seat and jittery as to what's going to happen next!
Once again, THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR WRITING THIS!!!!!