ext_49369 ([identity profile] kitsjay.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] darktrent182 2008-05-28 01:11 am (UTC)

Wow. These are really powerful. I love how Harry has this in him, but learns to deal with it and locks it away--and it makes it all the more hurtful in this one, when he learns of Bob's betrayal.

And Bob! Never willing to give an inch, when he kept Harry as safe as he could.

These are beautifully intriguing. The characters live and breathe--you do an excellent job of fleshing out Harry's emotions while keeping them true to form.

In short, they're wonderful!

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