ext_8625 ([identity profile] sarren.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] darktrent182 2006-02-26 03:29 pm (UTC)

Hey, still loving this series! I love the whole fiddling with the clothes thing!

My quibble is

I'd gotten an telegram

which is American English. (even though the rest of us use it now) I can't imagine Bertie using it then. Wouldn't he just have said 'received' or something?

If I"m wrong, I apologise, but it totally threw me out of the fic for a minute.


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