Dear Lord, thank you for the quibble. I had been trying to think of a girl's name that hadn't been used in the series, and I came up with Heather. Do you have any suggestions? I want to change that as quickly as possible, but I have no idea what to change it to. *facepalm*
*blush* Thank you for telling me what you liked about it. I rather liked the things that you mentioned, to be honest. The forehead-kiss is something I've seen in fics where one of the pairing is trying to tease the other, though it's usually when they're already together. Here, it seemed more poignant.
As for Jeeves' question of Bertie forcing him, I think it was more he was saying that to sort of wake Bertie up to the fact that while it might be romantic to passionately kiss the girl who's been protesting, it's not entirely kosher. That, and with Stephen Fry as my mental image of what Jeeves looks like, Jeeves could defend himself very well against Bertie if Bertie even tried. *^^*
You read my George/Melchett? *surprised, pleased look* Wow! Thank you! I have a number of ideas for that series, but the brain sort of stalled on me. It took dabbling in J&W to kickstart it again, but it's been mostly this series! Ack!
But thank you for your comments, and especially for your quibble!
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*blush* Thank you for telling me what you liked about it. I rather liked the things that you mentioned, to be honest. The forehead-kiss is something I've seen in fics where one of the pairing is trying to tease the other, though it's usually when they're already together. Here, it seemed more poignant.
As for Jeeves' question of Bertie forcing him, I think it was more he was saying that to sort of wake Bertie up to the fact that while it might be romantic to passionately kiss the girl who's been protesting, it's not entirely kosher. That, and with Stephen Fry as my mental image of what Jeeves looks like, Jeeves could defend himself very well against Bertie if Bertie even tried. *^^*
You read my George/Melchett? *surprised, pleased look* Wow! Thank you! I have a number of ideas for that series, but the brain sort of stalled on me. It took dabbling in J&W to kickstart it again, but it's been mostly this series! Ack!
But thank you for your comments, and especially for your quibble!