ext_25797 ([identity profile] willdew.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] darktrent182 2008-03-22 12:24 am (UTC)

I like your use of Bob's POV here. I thought she was a great outside/third party to be looking in, because she's one of the few people who has all of the information surrounding those two.

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